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Writer of the Week

Year 6 

 

Congratulation to Amelie D for being our writer of the week. Her advert "Visit Wales" uses a range of techniques and amazing vocabulary to persuade her audience. As well as writing a wonderful speech, Amelie used expression and animation in her recording. Da iawn Amelie! A well deserved winner and keep up the amazing learning. 


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Year 5 R

Congratulations Luna for writing and performing a brilliant advert all about Wonderful Wales. Luna completed independent research to write the detail of her advert, including a range of persuasive devices and different AP sentences. Luna then recorded her performance and used expression to engage her audience. Da Iawn Luna!

 

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Year 5 (ST) - 'Visit Wales' Advert

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Vanessa is our writer of the week. In her advert "Visit Wales," she was able to include all of the success criteria regarding persuasive writing. This included AP sentences, rhetorical questions, facts and opinions within both her writing and speech. Well done, Vanessa!

Year 4 Congratulations to Callie Edwards, a really well presented presentation about special landmarks in Wales. She has used all of her skills and knowledge to make her presentation look good and has been thoughtful about the information she has included. 

Year 1

Congratulations Abdeljabbar! This week we were sequencing events in a story and writing a caption about part of the story. I was really impressed with your use of finger spaces and the way you used your phonics to spell some very tricky words.

 

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